A letter from a old friend…
Dear my friend Jorja
I love it at your house and all but I’m lonely I miss the minecraft world and all my friends Brains the zombie and Skiddles the spider with all the creeper flock, so every now again when you play minecraft can you let me say hello to them and get some more minecraft toys so I can play with them.
You're lonely friend Bomer .
nice job i liked how you described how your toy feels one thing try and put more punctuation
ReplyDeleteKiaora Jorja, its Aryan here just checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteI like how it didn't just say "I'm so lonely" and that you explained it well.
Next time could ya make it a bit longer?
Anyways awesome post!
This is A minecraft story and I love minecraft is this a letter from a creeper awesome this is an amazing post! :D
ReplyDeleteHi Jorja, Tobey here.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great not saying what it was until the end.
Next time you should not give us to many clues.
BYE!
Kia ora Jorja it is Chelsea.
ReplyDeleteI love how you did so much emotions like/sad /happy/lonely.
Next time can you do a reply on it. Keep it up Jorja.
Hay!!Jorja great job at writing this I think its amazing from kirsty
ReplyDeleteHi jorga i think you will miss him and he will miss you to.
ReplyDeleteHay Jorja it is Nirvana
ReplyDeletegreat work this is a good way for kids about minecraft it is a good kid game so well done love it maybe add more writing to it but it is amazing great work. bye for now
Hi Jorja it is your friend lachlan that is so sad i love it!!!
ReplyDeletehi jorja it is jrae. IS that crepir your friend.
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