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Friday, November 25, 2016

we are learning to edit our work. Anything in purple has been added to improve my work. 


Here it is:


12 comments:

  1. Hey Jorja! Hannah Bro Here!
    Great story retell thing! I didn't know this stuff very well.
    How long was the wars on for? Who was in the second world war?
    Blog ya later!

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    1. That might be in the next one maby?

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  2. Kia Ora Jorja
    I like your work it's very interesting,
    when did you make the slide cause I never remember you doing this but I like it a lot!

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  3. This is great
    kia ora chloe here
    this is some great information I am very siprized that you can rember all of this.
    bye

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  4. Kia ora Jorja.
    There are some interesting facts here about how life was during the time of war. Thanks for sharing this. Maybe next time some images might make each slide a little more interesting.

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  5. This is great
    kia ora chloe here
    this is some great information I am very siprized that you can rember all of this.
    bye

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  6. Hi Jorja it's Alyscia.
    I love this presentation of world war 1&2.
    I am with you as well I agree with I hope we do not have any more wars.
    Au Revoir.

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  7. Hi Jorja!
    I love the topic you chose to use no one really does it so thats cool!
    I love how you told us about world war one and two it gives us a lot more info
    I was just wondering, how long did it take for you to make this?
    Wait one more thing, I love how you done it in slides like bit by bit its really helpful!
    Well thats all I really have to say but.... BLOG YA LATA!
    Keep up the GREAT WORK Jorja!

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  8. HI ITS PHOENIX FRM THE JUNIOR HUB.I LIKE YOUR SLIDE.

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  9. Hi it Callum.
    Good job on your world war slide.

    I THINK THAT DONALD TRUMP GOING TO STAR WORLD WAR 3.

    I WILL MISS YOU

    BLOG U LATER.

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  10. Hey good job but if their was a word war 3 I will not like it awesome job have a good day.

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  11. Hi it is Angus I liked how you seed that word war people died and that is sad. maybe you sold say how long was the war.

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