Hi Jorja, it's me Elham. I love this poem and also I like The sentence that started with N: night fell on the icy world. Next time can you give more information. Blog u later!
Hey Jorja, Aryan here checking out your blog! The font and words you used in this are really cool. Maybe next time add some photos in. Anyways, blog ya later!
Hi Jorja chloe here Nice work next time make sure you can read the last sentence. I also love how there is not much words but alot of discription. Nice work Blog you later
Hey Jorja. Jasmine here. This is a great poem I really like how you have used work that describe what you are talking about and but also talking about the features in winter. Just a question do you think in our country does it really feel like winter? Kai pai.
Hey Jorja TJ nice job on your work love the winter peom I like it how you said night fell on the icy world but they are awesome any way hope you have a good day at school bye now.
Bonjour Jorja Emily here checking out your blog. This is a awesome poem. I love all the colour you used and the nice fonts. Well done on the great job with your winter poem.
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i apsiloply love that its so winterful get it wounderful and winterful hahaha maybe you should write more thats all from me bye
ReplyDeleteThanks I will think about that.
DeleteHi Jorja, it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteI love this poem and also I like The sentence that started with N: night fell on the icy world.
Next time can you give more information.
Blog u later!
How much more should I do?
DeleteHey Jorja, Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteThe font and words you used in this are really cool.
Maybe next time add some photos in.
Anyways, blog ya later!
Okey that is a good idea it is a little plain so yeah add pictures.
DeleteHi Jorja chloe here
ReplyDeleteNice work next time make sure you can read the last sentence.
I also love how there is not much words but alot of discription.
Nice work
Blog you later
Thanks I thought it was readable sorry.
DeleteHey Jorja. Jasmine here. This is a great poem I really like how you have used work that describe what you are talking about and but also talking about the features in winter. Just a question do you think in our country does it really feel like winter? Kai pai.
ReplyDeleteHey Jorja TJ nice job on your work love the winter peom I like it how you said night fell on the icy world but they are awesome any way hope you have a good day at school bye now.
ReplyDeleteBonjour Jorja Emily here checking out your blog.
ReplyDeleteThis is a awesome poem. I love all the colour you used and the nice fonts. Well done on the great job with your winter poem.
nice work jorja that is enough to impress the president lol
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