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Thursday, August 17, 2017

Pogress

Today I'm looking at my progress in my writing, to see how much I have inproved


Here is One of my not so good peices of writing .

Here is one of my better pecies of writing




I can now see that I need to do some more and the I am useing more paragahs.

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  1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2017 at 9:57 AM

    I like that poem Jorja by bailey and keep it up by bailey.

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